by Jessica Nov 14, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Climbing on jagged steps from the hell below |
I love the repetition in the last line and the meaning is deep. Great word choice and good flow too! Sorry its taking me so long to do this, i can't tell you how busy ive been. |
by emmerz
Im ont a very big -dark poem fan-, but i really did like this one. as i said to another poet, i really like the kyrielle form. it seems to just make sense to me. it may have just been that poem, but now it may just be these TWO poems because this one dew me in as well. good job! |
Great Poem, and keep writing! |
The repetition of the last line was wonderful. It really brought the poem together. Very powerful, too. Excellent work. |
by Darien
I really liked the line you repeated, it really wrapped around each stanza nicely. Good choice of words, and really neat ideas. |