Excellent poem! The emotion was very strong, and you flow was not at all forced. It was overall a wonderful poem,
-AnnMarie

This is really good! 10!! check out my poems n c what u think. thankz

Brian this is a great poem

Its me again, i shouldnt do this but i carnt help it, if i didnt care i wouldnt send this to you i do miss you and our boys so much

10 Brian....excellent....
interesting comments!!!!