This poem would have been excellent if only the last two stanzas went on just a while longer. Other then that I loved the theme and the emotion was strong, the flow was easily read!

Good write,
-AnnMarie

"But I never realized I didn't reach the top
So again I was alone when I woke up"
best stanza for me!!! good poem this one....keep it up! 5/5

I love this Poem