Comments : Falling into the ocean

  • 17 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    Very Excellent poem! It was wonderful, I felt the emotion, the flow was easily read. It was alll in all a great write,
    -AnnMarie

  • 17 years ago

    by AnAstAciA

    This poem is so good:) well done!!!! 5/5 take care^_^

  • 17 years ago

    by Pierced

    Wow. me love very much. Amazing flow and excellent choice of words.

  • 17 years ago

    by Pierced

    I love your poem. This one just has an amazing flow. You took my mind on a journey.