Wow, loved the poem. I love the structure and the wording of it; it's amazing. 5/5.
Much love, Emma xox

I thought you did a really good job on this... i especially liked how it started as 'for every child...', and then ended with that line. there was only one thing i could find that seemed a little out of place: shouldnt 'forgave' be 'forgiven'? or if you take out the 'has' then to change it to 'forgave and forgot' ? just a suggestion. overall 5/5 good work!

Wow!
I LOVED this, it was so profound and thoughtful.
The flow and wording were excellent and I enjoyed the imagery.
5/5

Again, just fantastic! The ending was memorable in particular, because it really stood out, but not enough to seem out of place. Emotional, and yet straightforward. 'T'was an awesome poem!

This is a good poem. 4/5 Easy to understan. Keep doing what you are doing.

I liked it but the repetition was not needed. It gets old after a while and made me not want to finish the poem. But I did and I liked everything about the poem except for the repetition. Keep up the great work. I still gave this poem a 5/5. =)