Comments : For Hannah [Though you are only two]

  • 18 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    How precious. The innocence of childhood captured in words. Beautiful Job.

  • 18 years ago

    by sibyllene

    What a sweet poem! That will be such a gift to her, when she's old enough to understand it.

    In a technical note, I like the alliteration you use. I'm a big fan of it : D

  • 18 years ago

    by emmerz

    I absolutely adore the imagery in this! (thats why you got third place;) ). it just paints a marvelous picture, and i heartily enjoyed reading it!