Not What It Seems

by *Charisma*   Nov 14, 2006


Edge of the beach, sun going down
Last time I'll be in this lonely town

Looks glamorous, yes I know
But leaving's better, I need to go

Behind the money and neon lights
Are bitter people and empty nights

Smiles...fake. Joy...it's false
Past perfection, there lies faults

Once I had the same look as you
Wonder, amazement, too good to be true

I came here with hopes held up high
Thought I'd spread my wings and fly

And I soared when I first took the leap
Until I realized, no ground 'neath my feet

Then I fell and kept on falling
With no one hearing all my calling

Till one day when I hit the ground
I knew it was time to leave this town

So my advice to you dear friend
Leave before your trip begins

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  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.. your soo creative.. the last line in this poem is killer.. and overall this poem is just super!! hehe lol i lovelovelove it.. the rhyming and flow is amazing.. yet again.. lol.. im sure youve heard this before but you have a ridiculous amount of talent

  • 17 years ago

    by Keath

    Beautiful poem. I like the short lines, rhyming and the metaphors. Somewhere the rhythm lost its track but you pick it up later. And I really love the last sentence. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    "Behind the money and neon lights
    Are bitter people and empty nights"

    Great imagery as always
    You always know exactly what to write!
    5/5
    *Gem*