"Behind the money and neon lights
Are bitter people and empty nights"

Great imagery as always
You always know exactly what to write!
5/5
*Gem*

Beautiful poem. I like the short lines, rhyming and the metaphors. Somewhere the rhythm lost its track but you pick it up later. And I really love the last sentence. 5/5

Wow.. your soo creative.. the last line in this poem is killer.. and overall this poem is just super!! hehe lol i lovelovelove it.. the rhyming and flow is amazing.. yet again.. lol.. im sure youve heard this before but you have a ridiculous amount of talent