I want your domination.

by xxxslash616xxx   Nov 14, 2006


I guess this is the only topic it really fits into. Tho I don\'t really agree with it. Anyway here it is, and it\'s more of a song than a poem?

I wanna be cuffed down,
Until I have no control
I want you to give me your lovin
Just like you have no soul.
I want to struggle against..
The chains that hold me down
Comon, baby now, comon baby now.
Lets play around..

Lets play around..

Chorus: Cuz I want your domination
For it is my, sweet vacation
Comon now, I want eradication
Cuz I want your domination(all x2)

I want you to smile at me.
Call me your little victim.
I want you to hold me
In your wild constriction.
I want to struggle against�.
The chains that hold me down.
Comon, baby now, comon baby now.
Lets play around�.

Lets play around.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lindsay

    It flows very nicely. I like its implications, and I enjoyed visualizing it.
    Haha...
    Even though you must have imagined it sounding completely different from the way I did, I still think that it would sound nice.

  • 18 years ago

    by Teria

    -Giggles- I like this one. :]
    It's cute, and a good poem.
    I wasn't going to read this one, because I figured why do the top 3 only, but.. I wanted to see how you wrote with ones that weren't dark/sad. You do really good, too.

    So, I guess you're a good writer all around. :]

    You should try different styles now, I say this because You should enter my contest. I'm not saying you'll win or anything, hun. but you have a good chance of getting past the first round. :]

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/discussion/topic.html?topic_id=68255

    There's that one. I have another one.. the name in the forum is Anything Goes.. You should do that too, if the spots aren't taken up. :]

    You're a great writer, and I'm adding you to my favorites soon as I vote on this poem. :]

    Oh, 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by jello

    Wow...amazing. really. hmmm reminds me of thoughts my friend would have...dirty dirty mind...lol. anyways good job!

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