Wow...amazing. really. hmmm reminds me of thoughts my friend would have...dirty dirty mind...lol. anyways good job!

-Giggles- I like this one. :]
It's cute, and a good poem.
I wasn't going to read this one, because I figured why do the top 3 only, but.. I wanted to see how you wrote with ones that weren't dark/sad. You do really good, too.

So, I guess you're a good writer all around. :]

You should try different styles now, I say this because You should enter my contest. I'm not saying you'll win or anything, hun. but you have a good chance of getting past the first round. :]

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/discussion/topic.html?topic_id=68255

There's that one. I have another one.. the name in the forum is Anything Goes.. You should do that too, if the spots aren't taken up. :]

You're a great writer, and I'm adding you to my favorites soon as I vote on this poem. :]

Oh, 5/5.

It flows very nicely. I like its implications, and I enjoyed visualizing it.
Haha...
Even though you must have imagined it sounding completely different from the way I did, I still think that it would sound nice.