Haha that was funny lol.. sad that some people really do do that though.. Great job on this.. Excellent Well done 5/5 xx

Kinda sketchy on the rhyming, but I love the overall thought. Such a waste of money on such a little chance.
Charisma*

This is hilarious i loved it!!! very true to life too. well done x

Great poem :) keep it up

Jeannie,
Girl you penned an awesome poem here. You've added a little giggle to my day.

disconnected from reality.
^^^
Love this ending line.
Been there, did that .....and bought the ticket ...lol

A great read Jeannie !

Lol.. i liked this poem, a fun senc of humor to play with. I loved the fact it was over a lottery ticket... cause its different and unique. i felt that your others were written a bit better, as i felt that some words were kind of forced.. but stilla great write.. well done keep it up.
I Hope To get some advise from u on my poems. take care and keep writing
Love Kirsty xx