AS THE SHIP SAILS

by -Usmi-   Nov 14, 2006


Traveling in the ocean, in the dark night
Out of everyones reach, out of the sight
Fighting the ocean waves and as the water falls
Thinking of surviving this, youre false
Its raining heavily, thunders in the sky
Everyone is crying and asking why
Its a nightmare for the people on board
They are strong but still seems coward
Theres nothing they can see except water all around
Praying to reach the shore, even to see any ground
They have no navigation, not even any direction
Escaping death and finding any destination
Waves thrashing into the ship trying to break it down
Its sinking in the ocean as if death is on hound
They could see it with their own eyes the ship on the brink
Between life and death its making a link
After a little hard time, the rain stopped falling
And could hear their final destination calling
Soon after that they saw a land in front of them
All were happy as if they have found a big gem
They thought this would never end, but they have coped
As The Ship Sails, it gives them more and more hope

UsMaN.S

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nyx

    Huh i never read a poem like this interesting -well done i seemed to be able to imagine it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kassie

    Very nice..... very nice.. i like this one

  • 18 years ago

    by apoet

    I like it!

  • 18 years ago

    by rocker666chick

    Good poem I like the link between death. But I think It could have used a better ending well that is only what I have to say it's good the way it is too...

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma Brown

    Lovely poem; great reasoning; 5/5.
    Much love, Emma xox