by -Usmi- Nov 14, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
first love
Writing something about me makes me mad |
by ShootingStar
Nice poem*5 |
by Alessandro
Wow very vey good, you leave me speachless.. nice |
by Nyx
Its nice was this really a dream... this sounds like a story a good one-well done |
Sweet poem! Had a nice eye catching title, which caught my attention. Had a nice flow, and great usage of vocaburaly. I thought some of the lines were a bit too long but still. An excellent read! very enjoyable, keep it up! xx |
by Dustins Gurl
Hey great job keep it up |