by Court Nov 14, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Time finds you. |
This peom is really great! It has a nice flow, good vocab usage, and i was hooked form the first line. One tip for improvement is that your punctuation. You did use it but i htought you should of used enjambment and stuff. Still a good read, keep it up! xx |
This peom is really great! It has a nice flow, good vocab usage, and i was hooked form the first line. One tip for improvement is that your punctuation. You did use it but i htought you should of used enjambment and stuff. Still a good read, keep it up! xx |
by tinna
Im adding u on my fav list after reading this one, tallent is all i can say about ur poems! |