Im adding u on my fav list after reading this one, tallent is all i can say about ur poems!

This peom is really great! It has a nice flow, good vocab usage, and i was hooked form the first line. One tip for improvement is that your punctuation. You did use it but i htought you should of used enjambment and stuff. Still a good read, keep it up! xx

This peom is really great! It has a nice flow, good vocab usage, and i was hooked form the first line. One tip for improvement is that your punctuation. You did use it but i htought you should of used enjambment and stuff. Still a good read, keep it up! xx