Comments : Cheated .

  • 18 years ago

    by Anonymous

    This poem is full of even more AMAZING! I like how you resolved it in the end, and found it a little funny, actually. It flowed very well. I think you deserve another 5. ;]

  • 18 years ago

    by AntiSocial16

    Empowering and beautiful-5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Teria

    Okay, I can totally relate.
    -Wipes Eyes.- Lol, yes it made me cry. eek.

    Anyway.

    This poem rocked. The first stanza was perfect. :]
    And it just got better from there, hun.
    THe emotion was great, the flow was perfect, along with the rhyming. Didn't seem forced or anything.

    Great Job. 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    That's right girl. Any guy that cheats is NEVER good enough. If he's going to break your heart, and lie to your face then he deserves in hell. Cheating is the lowest of the low. Keep your head up girl. Great poem too. 5/5
    Don't let that you-know-what get you down. Lol. Laters =>

    Taylor

  • 18 years ago

    by AlexAndra

    Wow... your poetry is amazing!! keep it up!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily Jo

    That poem was GREAT. it had so much emotion in it. i can understand what your going through...its happened to me before....they day before our 7 month anniversary....but ive realised, im better than him, and i hope you realise that too...
    great poem...

    love...emily-jo.

  • 18 years ago

    by EbonyEyez

    I liked it allllllooooooottttt

  • 18 years ago

    by Lynzie

    I love it and yeah i can totally relate! 5/5 keep writin

  • 18 years ago

    by superman15

    Wow this is solid.
    check out my collection and let me know what u think.

  • 18 years ago

    by rae

    So true

  • 18 years ago

    by Amy

    Hey,i just found out my boyf slept wid anuva gal, n he lied bout if for ages, so i can so relate to this.only difference, is i still cant let go.great poem tho,if only it were that easy!lol def 5 xx

  • 18 years ago

    by hiiiii

    Aww i love your poem it makes so much sense xx well done =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Cara

    Omg that poem was sooo good. and so true!

  • I can totally relate to this poem... i love it!! * favs*

  • 18 years ago

    by asia

    5/5 i loved ur poem alot i can relate 2 this from all the relationships i've been in i hope u find someone better

  • 18 years ago

    by latoya

    Great writing that many can relate to, i've been in similar situation, one thing i will say is that u learn how to get over it, though it may take time. your heart gets stronger and resistant to potential pain. keep up the good work girl.

  • 18 years ago

    by &&//ii.lovee.you\\

    Omg thats a really reallygood poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Beth

    Ahh. nice poem... it reminds me a bit TOO much of my EX boyfriend...
    Im sure that there are tons of us out there who can relate...(me being one of them )
    Well done!

  • 18 years ago

    by Chantelle

    Good job on ur poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Brisa

    Great poem. i really do agree with what your poem is trying to say. great job =]