by Lindsay Nov 14, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Red silk fabric brushed gently against the weaving of the stone tower. Was it day? Was it night? Such precious knowledge did not exist, for the windows shed both sunlight and shadow at once. |
Wow, i loved the words your chose. so descriptive. perfect |
by Kristina
Wow this is amazing. i really like the imagation in this and i love the words you choosed. beautiful. 5/5 |
This painted a detailed picture . |
I have always enveyed the skill to make a poem flow without a rhyme scheme..you diid it oustandingly with great imagery |
by SCARECROW
You seem to have a knack for stories. This one was just as good as the last; vividly descriptive, emotional and the language was utterly beautiful. Well done! |