I love the way in which your poem is visual,.. keep it up and youll create more and more beautifull ones each try,.. i give you a 5 for this one because i think it was refreshing

You seem to have a knack for stories. This one was just as good as the last; vividly descriptive, emotional and the language was utterly beautiful. Well done!

I have always enveyed the skill to make a poem flow without a rhyme scheme..you diid it oustandingly with great imagery

This painted a detailed picture .
Great imagery and it was emotional .
The words that you used and how yu used them.
Beautiful(:
Another well done poem .

Yur so going on my favees .
..ღ__MiNDYY

Wow this is amazing. i really like the imagation in this and i love the words you choosed. beautiful. 5/5

~Kristina

Wow, i loved the words your chose. so descriptive. perfect

much love and many kisses,
bex