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by latin girl   Nov 14, 2006


It's now that time
Where I reflect
And think about the choices
Millions of possibilities
I'm coming to that time where it all started
November
My symbol
I
My counterpart
The very paradox of my life
Laughs
How ironic
"It was the best of times,
It was the worst of times"
November
Life
My everything
Everything has been
Riding up to this point
I couldn't even talk about it
I'm laying it down
To it's final resting place
For so long it's been with me
For oh so long
It was A Once Upon A Time
A magestic moment
That was total perfection
Like my favorite melody
Where when listening
One envisions light
They happened
They happened
But the funeral is here
And the rivers have long been dry
And Life has been Gone for too long
Goodbye Once Upon A Time
Goodbye November
I'm not letting my past
Determine my today

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Very interesting piece. 5/5 It took me a minute to actually understand the whole 11 and november thing. =] Nice choice of words. Keep up the good work. =]

    >black&&blue

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Wow, this was a really deep poem. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to this one. I know I can. My life too, is somewhat of a paradox. I liked the idea of using the intro for "A Tale of Two Cities" glad you also quoted too. Nicely done.

  • 17 years ago

    by ellewen

    I like it. But at the beginning you kinda lost me, I had to read it a couple times to fully understand it. But other then that its fantastic! 5/5
    keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a great poem, 5/5!!! great flow and structure!!! keep it up!!!

    Bryan,

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Excellent peom keep up the good work.
    And great word choice.5/5