Excellent peom keep up the good work.
And great word choice.5/5

This is a great poem, 5/5!!! great flow and structure!!! keep it up!!!

Bryan,

I like it. But at the beginning you kinda lost me, I had to read it a couple times to fully understand it. But other then that its fantastic! 5/5
keep up the good work

Wow, this was a really deep poem. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to this one. I know I can. My life too, is somewhat of a paradox. I liked the idea of using the intro for "A Tale of Two Cities" glad you also quoted too. Nicely done.

Very interesting piece. 5/5 It took me a minute to actually understand the whole 11 and november thing. =] Nice choice of words. Keep up the good work. =]

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