Wow Ray. Thats so...wow. Strong. Idk wht to say. It's amazing. *hugs* dont forget im here for you. And i'll support you no matter what.

Im sorry about your disceased freind,
hateful people are one of the worlds many problems.

Wow, very emotional peice you have written. I will however state again, the structure is not good, perhaps break it into stanzas. The Flow was good. The choice of words where also good. It was very long, maybe break it into two poems, or cut it back. Other than that is was very well written. Great Job.

Ciao, Joe

Oh hun i remember that story im so sorry i know that was so hard for you.
well me and adreanna miss you
luv ya bye

ps maybe you could write back to me cuz i need some advice on love