Comments : So Confused.....

  • 18 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    Wow, you sound exactly like me!!
    I used to write like you when i started, and my name is amber.
    Anywho i was in a relationship and i ended up calling it quits at 9 months.
    It all depends what you don't no what you can believe him about, if it's a big problem talk to him about it and if you still can't trust him then let go, it's not the end of your life of course you'll never forget him but you will move and love and have plenty more boyfriends. But try and work it out first. I ended my relationship becuse i was told he was cheating on me by all his friends but he said other wise then he said he shoulda cheated on me and i was sad of course but you move on, and you will find other's don't be so certin he is the one, it can't last forever.
    Anywho..
    The poem is pretty good, you get your message and your feelings out, although your vocabulary could be a bit better and your rhymes are a bit amiture*sorry if i spelt it wrong...
    Anywho, keep writing darling!

  • 18 years ago

    by Boogie

    Great poem! i loved it ! i love the way it flowed and the choice of words... and to be honest .. at this point im also lost in my relationship.. so i was kinda able to relate with ur poem..

    5/5 ! keep writting.. ure really talented!

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