"You're stuck in my mental hearse."

That line was really powerful.
Great poem, lotsa emotion, just how i like them
5/5
*Gem*

Xcellent poem, i said that because your words are powerful and they touch the emotions beneath, and I can relate, great write....XP

It's funny how a few wrong words we hear from a love one can almost kill us, don't wait bu the phone man just find another girl to call. 5/5 nice work man

Wow. I could feel your emotions pouring out of this poem. Wonderful.

You're stuck in my mental hearse

^ My favorite line by far because it's very strong and filled with emotion. You've got a lot of talent, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie