This is really great! The only problem I saw was your last line you spelt triumphed wrong* But other than that I loved it! :) I usually choose which lines or stanza I like best. But this is ... Perfect! You really go for the challenge, I might try this style.

Excellent
5/5

Woah, hey! I another new style! I might try this. You poem was sweet, btw. 5

Wow I really liked this poem. It really makes you think. When people think of heros they think of like white knights on beautiful steeds riding in to save the day, when in actuality they are just normal people like you and me who step in to do the right thing when everyone else has turned their backs. And these are the people that dont usually get the credit that they deserve. People should always remember to thank them because without them the world would be a much darker place for us all. Wonderful job on this poem, I liked the twist to it. I loved the ending the last line was very stunning and powerful. Nice job and beautiful work keeping it true to the structure.