Questioning The Truth

I liked the questioning sentences and unanswered words and they are so true
As everyone asks this sometimes
I liked he wording and flow of this
Good job,
Laura

This is a beautiful free verse poem. It had its own style in it and the flow is also cool. I like your wordings.I gave it a 5/5

With love
Fsams

I found this piece to be quite great to tell you the truth. I feel as though the repetition worked really well throughout this it was effective. I think if you added more describing words into this poem it would make the emotions more stronger, Not though they werent I just think with a bit more It would make this poem really powerful. Other then that this was quite a meaningful read. Well done on creating this~mel

Another well written piece, Marie :). This time, your repetition works much more effectively, as your sentances are sharper and straightfowardly put. However, a small suggestion for improving. In each stanza, just at the end of the second line, place a full stop- this well make the sentances more abrupt. Also, don't hesitate to weave more adjectives or emotive language into your words. This will help bring out the meaning to your piece and give definition to your work.
An example of this:

"I speak directly to you,
Words leaking from my mouth.
Do you hear me?"

Personally, I think that possesses more meaning. But that's just my opinion; the end change is up to you :D.

Overall, a solid piece :).

Very nice
I'm very sorry
I think you did an excellent job with all of the last lines
very nice
5/5
kaila