Wow, that was really unexpected. Wow, I'm still shocked it was really amazing. WOAH...lol that was awesome. I have nothing to say, great work!!

WOWOWOW:)
your friend,
alissa

W-O-W! wow. That was amazing! Beautiful! Wonderful! and oh-so heart-filled! I loved it. the only thing that kinda messed me up was this line:
You are my â??must haveâ??
because of the little 'a' thinggies...what are they for? And my friend Gina says it's cute and I agree as well! Amazing! Beautiful! and oh-so heart-filled! I loved it...and it was so sweet. 5/5 girl and keep up the GREAT work!

Omg that is such a sad poem! it was really powerful and touching, i really like it.

An excellent read! i really liked the way all the stanza's ended with a question. It makes the poem a really worthwhile read! It has an awesome style and great flow! Keep it up! xx

Love it, especially your use of parallel structure. (Feck, I sound like my english teacher *shudders*). Either way, it's a lovely poem, and it's utterly wonderful how you convey so many emotions so easily. Beautifully written, and I'm glad to have had the privilege of reading it.

Wait, is it parallel structure or repetition? Repetition, isn't it? Haha, gosh, talk about an I-no-speak-engrish mistake.

Hm, well, as long as it's true feelings, then it's fine. I haven't read a poem like this, but it's pretty good. Each of the lines pertains to the question following. It's so emotional, too... :'[
5/5

Wow there was a great twist at the end, i liked it! beautiful poem, maybe next time put in a little more emotion though, let the reader deeper in your thoughts. nice job 5/5

Wow that was really strong and i liked it a lot! 5/5
Kayla

Hey sry didnt realize til i wrote the comment that like everyone else said WOW but just lets you know it was super delicious!
Kayla (again)

I wasn't expecting that ending, that came as a surprise.
I loved this, it is my favourite of you's so far.
Keep writing!

I really like this one. You put alot of your feelings into for a short poem. Keep it up! 5/5

*tears* Wow, I can relate to this greatly. This poem makes me think of my real dad whom I haven't talked to in many years, it brings back all those old memories that I do remember of him. A very sad poem indeed for me to read. You're a fantastic writer, keep it up. 5/5

Stephane

Omg...i can totally relate to this...i think the exact same things every day...excellent job writing these feelings down...5/5.

Overall very sad. but i was thrown off a bit by the ending, i guess you wanted ti to end on a different note. bbut the poem is titled Do /you/.. But it was sad.. what ever happned im truly sorry. it flowed very vell-especially for a freeverse.

x.x:Lauren

Wow . I didn`t expect the end .
That was surprising, and different(:
Which is why i lalala`love it, hun` .
It was sad, but well written .
The flow was good for a free-verse espcially .
..ღ__MiNDYY

Awe this is really good, but really sad. you can feel your emotions coming through.

I loved this poem. The questions at the end of each stanza had a really nice effect on the poem. I think that it was very well thougth out. And although it was short, it held so much emotion in it. I don't think you should change anything in this. The flow and rhtyhm was really good and the questions fit with each stanza and added on to the sadness within the poem. You did an amazing job on this! 5/5

This was a well written poem but this stanza needs to be changed:

I talk right to you
Words from my mouth
Do you hear me?

Instead of right.. try directly or another word .. right just doesn't seem to fit and make sense.

Other than that, a good job!

This was good but very simple. I felt that more detail was needed for it to be better. In some cases simplicity works but I feel here it didnt. Try adding more details and more emotion and it will be a better poem. Nice job though 4/5