I can't even BEGIN to describe what I love about this poem! Your style, vocabulary, imagery and manipulation of language: all FANTASTIC. This is the first poem of yours I have read, and you're already on my favourites. I'm off to read more, and again, well done!

P.S. About “Éternité amère-doucer”, I wrote it as more of a narrative, no flow was intended. And I am flattered that you liked it. ^.^

I am so going to cry. You wrote this about a girl you really liked and if any guy ever wrote a poem (any poem!) like this to me I would probably cry my eyes out. Hmm...she must be very pretty for Aphrodite is one of my favorite Goddess'. I applaud and your flow is great in all your poems. I can't offer like, ya know, very good compliments for *shrugs* I dunno. That was a major stupid sentence but all your poems touch me and god! I can't stop reading now. damn
Well,
infinite/5

~*Katie*~