by Kristina Nov 15, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
All those nights, |
by emmerz
It was great until the first half of the last stanza. it felt like you needed to find something to throw there, and it didnt quite fit in regards to flow. but keep trying!4/5 |
Meaningful write. It's easy to feel how close you feel to this person, and how you don't want things to change, even if it seems as though they will. |