Please Don\\\'t Tell...

by Chelsea   Nov 15, 2006


I love him and I need him,
but please don\\\'t tell...

I want him and I need him,
but please don\\\'t tell...

He loves her and I know
but please don\\\'t tell...

He doesn\\\'t want me and I know,
but please don\\\'t tell...

Because, I know he doesn\\\'t care...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea

    Okay, so this isn't a poem, sorry.
    But I just wanted to let everyone know that I'm giving up on poetry. I am no good, so I decided not to try anymore... But if you like my stuff you should email me telling me so... and I might try to keep writing... but if you don't then this prolly wont affect you much... haha.

    My email: hellz_greatest@Hotmail.com

    Email me anytime!
    I'll most likely email you back.

    Sincerely,
    Chelsea

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Good start. As you advance, you will know that the best love poems are created with abstract imagery and hardly any "fill" words or repetition.

    keep it up