Good start. As you advance, you will know that the best love poems are created with abstract imagery and hardly any "fill" words or repetition.

keep it up

Okay, so this isn't a poem, sorry.
But I just wanted to let everyone know that I'm giving up on poetry. I am no good, so I decided not to try anymore... But if you like my stuff you should email me telling me so... and I might try to keep writing... but if you don't then this prolly wont affect you much... haha.

My email: hellz_greatest@Hotmail.com

Email me anytime!
I'll most likely email you back.

Sincerely,
Chelsea