Comments : This World, Cant Take No More

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    I know what it's like to feel this, i feel the same way. But i just think, i have to try to have hope. And you should too. I think this is a good poem, which expresses alot of raw emotion. I think that it seems a bit unfinished though, as though something needs to be added to the end. Hmm.. not sure. But i still like it. So a 5/5

    Tammie