Beautiful of dark poems you potray here, creative yet unique style writing, simply yet flowed well within every stanza.....awesome!

Wow! thank god ! u mentioned the meanings........warna main to webster par meaning dhoondti reh jaati yaar.:0)

but really very good job. very dark. 5/5

luv

First of all, (like the post above me) Thanks for the meanings! Lol.
Secondly, this has to be one of the best poems I've read. So deep and powerful and so much meaning behind it....well at least that's the way I see it. I loved this. I don't even know what to say. I just wish I can give it more than a 5. =P This was amazing. Incredible write!!! Never stop! [[And thanks for the comment]]. =) Take care.

Love always,
-Poetess

Wow ur poem is really complex but put well extremely well (i must admit i'm glad you put those meanings at the bottom hehe) great read 5/5 sam

Great wording, i was actually surprised to realise i knew a few words!! lol
But the whole concept and the flow of this poem was almost.. magic. If that makes sense.
A haunting piece
5/5
*Gem*

You know, it's very considerate of you to leave a small glossary to make your poem easier to understand (no sarcasm intended). Not many writers would take the time to do that.
Also, it was a lovely poem! 5 from me ^^

I loved your wording! I don't think there was anything wrong with this poem.
Lovely write! Looking forward to reading more of your work!
5/5

What a haunting poem. brilliant. love the translations at the end. great job x

Ahh, a dark one from u, that is so cool..

Great poem :)

Ooo i like this your poems are so perfectly pieced together they are a joy to read