Your Not So Wise Words

I think we can all relate to this poem at one point in all of our lives. I was once a bit over weight myself not going to lie =/ and i pushed passed that and look great now only because i was made fun of and had so much to prove! i love it! =)

I wish this never happened. i hope that no guys would ever do this.

this is a great poem. this trully is. i voted and gave you a 5. good work.

i would never ever treat someone as badly as what the guy in your poem does.

you expressed yourself well. ill read more def!

david

Very good poem. I'm sure that a lot of people could relate to this peom. I liked it.5/5

Wow that was really good.. despite how sad it was. it's such a good description of what a lot of people face, and I like how you made it so personal.
5/5 for sure :)
♥Robin

Really good..so sad..i know exactly how ya feel..email me at bennetta@bamberg1.com if u ever wanna talk..5/5
!amanda!