Painted Peacocks

by LadyPearl   Nov 15, 2006


Sapphire jewels stroked
across an Asian vase
Splashing hues upon its
circular base

Emerald tails emerge
Then two golden eyes
Facing each other in silence
as love arise

A beauty drenched without
a single word muttered
Beneath the early sun
respect flutters

First a bow, then a dance
Flying across the stone skin
In a lover's intimate glee
as their world spins

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Awwwww..* I really like this. I really like the last couple lines. The whole poem flows together very well. Keep it up.

    >black&&blue

  • 18 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    This is a pretty poem ,I love the imagry of those beautiful peacocks.
    Keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This is a touching Peace of work....
    its soo good...
    dont really know what to say

    5/5 keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Mm I saw one grammar mistake .
    But besides that, it was beautifully written .
    Another poem with great description .
    And it flowed nicely .
    Yur a fantastic writer .
    Definitely going on my faves .

    --I`ll do Migration after I finish my hw .
    ..ღ__MiNDYY

  • 18 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    This is the first poem of yours I read, and you're already on my favourites. As a friend of mine loves to say; I'm floored, man!

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