Interesting Poem. I would say that this poem could be inspirational too. The second stanza was my favorite.
Here's some things you might change: The poem was long in a sense that repeatedly used "fill words" You could either summarize it or add more imagery like:

"A place where roses bloom black
And the ground swallowed by soot"

One more thing, It felt like you were talking about a place (death?) and then suddenly turned to deep life lessons. You could improve the transition.

Good Write!! Keep it up

Aww this was sad but the last line maybe it sweet. wonderful work you have here. 5/5

~Kristina

Mmmm.....Well done here. I think that by far my favorite stanza was the second one and I love how you ended it too, a good ending I think is one of the most important essentials in poetry and you nailed it. The only thing I see that was wrong was to me the flow was a little tiny bit off in some parts. You're a good writer, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie