Comments : Holding My Breath

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, you are giving out great messages through ur poems, keep up ur great work. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow i can defiantly relate to this. you did such an amazing job writing this. i love it. this is defiantly true towards me.
    dont ever stop writing! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    I like this one a lot. You portrayed some very strong emotions in this one here. I can relate to this at times in my life. You're an amazing writer, keep it up! :) 5/5

    Stephanie