Aww that was a really emotional piece of writing, i like the caption thing u wrote at the bottom cos its sooo true lol!
Great poem again!
love love
xxxxx

Another emotional poem by you, and i agree with u, it dont worth to fight over everything as rather we will regrat about it, lol.........nice job once again..5/5

Aww that was really good it has a verty good truth behind it and a lesson learned keep up the work 5/5 always
Kate~

So good. I really like how it flows!

I know what you mean..it suxs..we disagree but not really fight fight only like once and we worked igt out. but wow the anger bled through this message...wow i totally felt every emotion...awesome

Omg thats bought tears to my eyes.. me n harry (my boyfriend) have never had a serious fight but lately i duno its been all weird anyway um that poem made me think of like our situations coz we like have lil arguments over stupid things.. but yer fighting is not worth it totally agree. this was really touching - hit home for me =) keep it up xx