Wow.. i could feel it, the emotion.. the poem is still provoking my thoughts after some time.. its like a poem that u sow had reaped over time.. very deep.. i liked it..

I wont tell u to get along
I wont ask u to stay strong
But i'll be there holding your hands
When the path jus seems too long
I wont tell u to get over it
cuz i know its hard
i wont ask u to forget the past
when the moments break your heart
But i'll be there when you need me
i'll listen with my heart not just ears
i'll hold u and calm those tears
no more crawling in the dark
we'll climb over those walls together
remember i'll be there for u
we'll make it through any kind of weather

Wow...
this poem made me cry...
you have excellent talent...
keep it up things will get better
especially if you keep writing like this!
i wish i could give it a 1000/5 but i guess a 5 will do
*kaila*

Wow. such strong emotion in this poem. Great Job

I know how you feel. If u ever need to talk or sumthin just email me or sumthing. Stay strong

WOW..this poem is awsome u have tonnes of talent.........the emotion in this poem is so overwhelming..