How sad! 5/5, seriously.
The imagery- the flow- the wording- it was all amazing!

I love this poem. I love it so much because it is about serious issues. I mean, not that other poems aren't, but they're all things that need to be stopped in the world. It's great that you could write a poem like that. Excellent write. Good flow, and strong words. Keep it up. =] 5/5 Definately.

Tammie

Again, not forced, so very lovely. Although you use parallel structure, it didn't become tiring (or boringly repetitive) to read. Actually, it made it even more effective, and memorable, so I congratulate you on a job well done. Beautiful work!

Very, very well done. That was just a great sad/truthful in a way poem. I really liked it. Great Work. Thank you very much for the comments they were very much appreciated. 5/5 God Bless.

~*Tay*~

How sad! I love how you wrote about serious issues. The flow and everything else was excellent. It is a very powerful piece.

>black&&blue

Hmm, it was good. Certainly not your best, but it was good. The rhymes were catchy. That's all I have to say :/

It seems simple, yet at the same time, the content is complex. Great job.

Great poem :) well done

I think you have gave a great message in this poem, and i do agree with you , its people who make this world like a hell,
i really liked this poem, great job once again, 5/5

Very good job! Everything in this poem was so very true to read because these things do really happen in life. Sad poem to read but it also let's us face the real reality of the world. Great job! 5/5 You're an amazing writer, keep it up.

Stephanie

Oh my god this poem is so meaning ful to me that i can't even discribe it.... i have to send this poem to some of my friends for them to read...
im almost in tears!
wow
keep writing you are great !!