by Sorefromreality Nov 15, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Thoughts are swirling,emotions whirling, my sanity unfurling |
by N M Lambert
This is a great poem... it has a sense of urgency that runs through it which captures the mutual joy and pain of being in love and the dependency it brings... the ending ''happy birthday'' is quite unexpected.... but it works. great job x |
by Tammie
That's a really sweet poem. The emotion in it is so raw and true. That makes it so much better. I love this line: |