That's a really sweet poem. The emotion in it is so raw and true. That makes it so much better. I love this line:

In case you're wondering, that's my heart on my sleeve.

It stood out to me heaps. Keep up the great work. As always, i look forward to reading more. =]

Tammie xo

This is a great poem... it has a sense of urgency that runs through it which captures the mutual joy and pain of being in love and the dependency it brings... the ending ''happy birthday'' is quite unexpected.... but it works. great job x