by Rahl The Layman Lord Nov 15, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
other
Thy pain is great and wounding, staring at the rain. |
by Miakoda
Woo jase i like this pem it's Interesting and acuse the use of the word....Beautiful... |
Nice i loved it =) keep it |
by courtney
The only thing that i can really say is WOW thats great! |
Really good give it a 5/5 |
Awesome write, but yet again, the structure is not good, it is in the form of paragraphs, almost like a story, trying breaking it into Stanzas. |