Mind-Numbing Blinding Pain

by Gem   Nov 15, 2006


The pain is cutting really deep
I can only escape it in my sleep
It's starting to take over me
I'm living in pure agony

It just never goes away
It's haunting me day after day
It hangs around like a bad smell
It's like some sort of painful hell

This has to be some cruel curse
The pain just keeps on getting worse
It's so bad I'm tearing out my hair
It never dims, it's always there

It's starting to drive me insane
This mind-numbing blinding pain
I wish I'd never had that cake
I'm sure it caused this damn toothache! ©

*Gem*

(I had to go to the dentist for a check up the other day *shudder*)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Lol.. i love this poem... you made it seem like there was something else going on.. but it was just the dentist.. i love your style.. it had a great flow... and made me laugh. i hope to read some more soon...
    Hope that you will be able to check out some of my poems...take care
    Love Kirsty xx

  • 18 years ago

    by DarkJem

    That is cool well done :)

  • 18 years ago

    by HottChic

    I like this poem. it's funny.
    check out some of mine sometime.
    lanna

  • 18 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Haha tooth aches are the worst no question - stupid cake lol haha check out my poem called the dentist you'll laugh lol great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Hahahaha, I liked this, I found it to be very true and accuarate.
    Hope your tooth is better now!

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