Omg tooth pains are the worst... not even kiddin i can take a punch but when u bit down on a tooth thats been in pain it just sends shock waves un the mouth... GREAT poem 5/5
PeACe
Anthony

+.+ Lol. I had a feeling, you were gonna say it's was like a headache or something like that. Lol. Good work. Funny :) +.+

I like it, but it doesent nonly have to relate to a toothache :) a heartche fit this poem just the same godamn you're good at writing :)))

This was really funny...great write

all the best and take care

Haha thats a well good poem i so wrnt expecting that haha welldone lol!
love love
xxx

Wow, Gemma, once again you proved ur the best. very nice job done...
5/5

Hahahaha, I liked this, I found it to be very true and accuarate.
Hope your tooth is better now!

Haha tooth aches are the worst no question - stupid cake lol haha check out my poem called the dentist you'll laugh lol great poem

I like this poem. it's funny.
check out some of mine sometime.
lanna

That is cool well done :)

Lol.. i love this poem... you made it seem like there was something else going on.. but it was just the dentist.. i love your style.. it had a great flow... and made me laugh. i hope to read some more soon...
Hope that you will be able to check out some of my poems...take care
Love Kirsty xx