Now that.was.brilliant. Seriously, I loved that! Your vocabulary here was fabulous, and the description used and imagery created was wonderful!

Excellent. 5/5.

This poem is really awesome i really liked it......it was so deep (i like deep poems)
10/10

Good poem love it......ok peace

This is a good poem although it goes a bit off track...

(Somewhere,
on the lips of the threadbare horizon,
your smile became my essence.)
^^ I absolutely loved those lines. You had an amazing vocab use in this with beautiful imagery. The flow and rhythm of this was really good and held up well. The emotions were also amazing. I loved every single piece of this. Amazing piece! 5/5

Wow great :)

I liked it,In my opinion it could have been longer,but that is just me lol but other than that I liked it

Wow that is amazing!!! I love the imagery! And you ahve a greta vocabulary!!! That is the best poem I have read yet!!!!!!! keep it up!!!!! *i would throw roses on stage!

Your poems to abound with a heart of sadness,joy and a decisive spirit.The vocabulary you possess is amazing and used exquisitly.One day you will find a sober Knight and drink fine champagne in an upright glass.

Great poem. I like it alot. It has a good rhythm to it and it is just the right length. Keep up the good work. 5/5

Your vocabulary BLEW ME AWAY! Your rhyming was also giving me the same affect. I love this part:
My mind bleeds a gasp, elicited by my eyes.
It is carried astray
by a hurricane like a brittle cane raindrop.

I whisper your name into the dank atmosphere.

(Somewhere,
on the lips of the threadbare horizon,
your smile became my essence.)
You are an amazing writer Vladimira. Keep up the AWESOME work!

Excellent
5/5

Sylvia plath in the making

Perfect - And I don't say that often.
The vocabulary was outstanding - the best I've ever seen in a poem. The flow was flawless & the message was very deep. =] Overall, fantastic job! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

U are such a HARD OUT one--- seriously girl...okay its hard to understand...but knowing you it prob wasnt even made to be understood.....
I am lovin it ay....

Toni,:)

This is so great!
i love the style of it. it sounds very um.. honest? i'm not sure. but i love it. i love the story in it, even though it took a few times for me to understand it right. =]

Beautifully written.
<3