I like it but the heartache part not aching anymore i didnt really like. I would like it soo much better if you said that your heart aches even more or something but hey thats just be. good job:)

Once again,really sad! but i still love it! you are an amazing writer!

Aww like i was like that few years ago just looking to get more alco not to feel anything... Amazing poem! so good how u brought it on :)