Wow! That was a very good poem. I loved the repetitiveness in the poem. I thought in the middle the rhythm was a little sketchy, but still enjoyed the poem!
Charisma*

Dang girl u r sooooo good!!!! all i can say is ur sucha poetic person and all ur poems r wonderful!!!! this one is great cuz u can tell how much u regret staying quiet about things u wanted 2 say...keep up the out standing work...and ur sooo good that i just had 2 add u as a favorite!! :-)

TeLL me!!,, who is the boy and i'LL teLL him thesE thiNgs.., hehehehhe.,., just joking.,.,
peace 0ut!!

Love this poem, all your works really good..x

This s good!
keep it up :D

This is really good! i love the way you write. keep it up girl!
<3Ashley