Reminiscing

by lalalailoveyou   Nov 15, 2006


Her smile fades away
Teardrops slowly form
He really messed her up
Her heart is really torn
She sits and reminisces
Of times once shared together
Remembers his words:
"I'll Love you Forever."
He finally broke the strongest girl
She never saw it coming
While he worked his way into her head
Her mind was slowly dumbing
She still sits and wonders
How could a Love so good turn bad
How could the best Love she experienced
Be the Worst she'd ever have.

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  • 16 years ago

    by XxxxSoManyStitchesxxxX

    OMG!!! it aLmost mAde me Cry!!!
    ='[
    this iS mY st0ry!!!
    thE stRonG thAt beCame wEak!!
    grrr.,.,
    i LuRve diS so mUuUuch!!!!

    p.s.
    kindLy reAd and c0mment 0n mAh p0ems.,.,

  • 16 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    Omfg. that made me tear up. im reading more of ur work. omg. that was so good. AHHHHHH. plz comment one of mine

  • 17 years ago

    by The lil angel

    Nice poem!!!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Nicole

    5/5 great poem. i'm able to relate to it. its so poetic and sad and u can feel the pain.

  • 17 years ago

    by TiMe hEaLs aLL wOuNdS

    Wow this is such a great poem!!!! it really touched me cuz i no how it feels..... amazing words and its deep! keep writing cuz ill keep reading :-) 5/5

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