Comments : I Try Not To

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Omg what can i say about this one. this was really heartfelt with a lof of meaning behind it. alot of emotion ocming through. i loved its structure. a very touching piece. very well written. u expressed urself really good. keep it up. also happy new year may it bring lots of happiness and surprises. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by TrueLover

    Oh my goodness! I feel EXACTLY the same way you do, towards my boyfriend. In everything we share, everything we do together, I wonder, "did he feel this way about her, too..." Or them, I should say. I always wonder if the feelings he has are the same ones he's had for others, and what makes me so different? This is a great poem, a great show of emotion, one I couldn't achieve.