Bravo, I must say. You did an excellent job on making your own stlye for this piece. It was different, but in a good way.

The 'Tick-tocks' in between the lines was truly brilliant lol. I loved it. ^_^ It brought out a lot to the poem. The flow was excellent with the parts in between the 'Tick-tocks' and the imagery was great. I really understood what you were trying to say. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha